Friday, 23 March 2012

The Colour of Treason - Book Review

Book Review

The Colour of Treason - S.M Harrison - Kingmaker Press 2011

This is Su Harrison’s first published novel and I excitedly knew that it was going to be a great read. I have known Su for some time as an active member of Towton Battlefield Society, re-enactor and creative writer and understood that this work was a life dream come true and I grabbed my copy and launched myself into the volume with great anticipation.

Fifty pages in and I was at a crossroads, I just couldn’t get into the story and I found myself a with a decision to take, “do I put the book down and pretend that I had read it, or do I hope for the best and keep going?” I was frustrated because I couldn’t comprehend the problem I was experiencing. The writing style was fluid, fast paced
and with reminiscent touches of the Gothic and the narrative, and crafted together in small sections which flowed with the fabric of the story. The subject matter was a labyrinth of intrigue, murder, lust, treason, greed and conspiracy which kept me turning the pages. The historic detail was beyond reproach and exquisitely researched and took you back to a time gone by. Su has been a long time student of the Wars of the Roses and passionate creative writer and I should be loving this work and the fault must be all mine.

The lead character, Elizabeth Hardacre, did not fit into my niche thinking of how a young medieval woman would behave and act in this period and these circumstances. To me she was headstrong, driven by lust, held and dropped allegiances like leaves in the wind, far too independent and too strong willed and I just didn’t like her. I explained this to a friend and was bluntly told that this was a time when England had gone mad, the age of chivalry was gone and the recognised order had been thrown upside down. This was a moment when a light was turned on, a moment when you realised that in an age where Englishmen slaughtered Englishmen, royal brothers conspired against royal brother, allegiances were formed with traditional enemies, commoners became noble and king makers became traitors that a character portraying a stereotypical English rose full of politeness, blushes and fluttering heart beats was not going to work.

When I saw Elizabeth Hardacre as a women of her times, avaricious, opportunist and determined, striving to succeed in a dangerous world which was 1470 England, I began to cherish the words and found that I just couldn’t put it down. Elizabeth Hardacre is born into a family with allegiances to both the king and Warwick the Kingmaker and she is plunged into the sea of conspiracy at a high level, as the tale ebbs and flows between Middleham, London, Calais and the maelstrom of the Battle
of Empingham. The major characters of Warwick, Clarence, Hastings and King Edward are realistically brought to life and this tale, firmly grounded with historic detail, is a pleasure to read.

I bought my copy expecting a tale of historic courtly love and intrigue championed by a damsel in distress and what I got was a tale of cold blooded treason and conspiracy from a dark time in history with a feisty character you might not like, but one you had to admire and one which made the novel work.

This work is really the crowning moment of years of research and craft, and the flawed Elizabeth Hardacre doesn’t fit the usual romantic heroine stereotype, and because of this flaw she sits perfectly alongside the other flawed gems of Warwick, Hastings, Clarence, Edward and many more in those troubled times.

Mark Taylor, Chairman Towton Battlefield Society

Wednesday, 22 February 2012

Shop 'til you drop!

Whoo-hoo The Colour of Treason has arrived in the Towton Battlefield Society Shop! Here. 

Getting ready for the Battle of Towton Commemorative event which will also include authors George Peter Algar, George Goodwin, Helen Cox and Alan Stringer - almost need an event of our own!

Hope to see you there!

Monday, 30 January 2012

TOWTON 2012 - A DATE FOR YOUR DIARY

Hope to be attending a book signing at this event too - should be a great day out!

Monday, 16 January 2012

New Book Trailer for The Colour of Treason - Wars of the Roses Novel


The Colour of Treason is a medieval tale of love, loss, betrayal and ambition. One woman is many things...

Available from:
Lulu:
http://www.lulu.com/product/paperback/the-colour-of-treason/18734781

Amazon:
http://www.amazon.co.uk/The-Colour-of-Treason-ebook/dp/B006NPRI56

Sunday, 20 November 2011

Author's Notes in HF


Something I had never really thought of before or during the writing of the WsIP were author's notes. But now I'm getting near(er) the end of the first book I guess I should be! Seemingly peculiar to HF the author's note is where you get the chance to separate fact from fiction; justify any controversial choices you've made and point out some extra biographical notes that could not be shoe-horned into the narrative. At least that's what I think they are!
Interestingly some authors don't have them at all - Ken Follett's 'Pillars of the Earth' for example. While others give extensive historical detail and highlight anything they've had to compromise on or change - Bernard Cornwell includes them in each of his novels.
I was of the opinion that less is more; that I could end up writing a new textbook on the WoTR if I'm not careful and they are currently 3 pages long and counting - but that's because I got talking about the Earl of Warwick...again!

Saturday, 5 November 2011

How many drafts is enough?

As you know the WIP is now Ws IP! Two volumes: one ~240k and one ~200k words, but at least I feel like I'm getting somewhere now! During a recent discussion with a writing buddy I wondered how many drafts I'd gone through - now that 'the end' is in sight (my sis tells me too many and to get them out there!), but an article in the December issue of Writing magazine with writer and publisher Stewart Ferris says that is one of the commonest mistakes writers make - sending their pride and joy out into the world way too soon! He says that it shouldn't leave the nest until Draft 10! He lists what each draft is for: tightening the structure; character development; improving the dialogue; language and imagery; restructuring; adding conflict; improving the crucial opening pages; more character development and final proofreading! It confirms what I have found in my journey - that I can only concentrate on one or two aspects as I rework the novels - oh and that's another thing - there aren't writers - only rewriters which is what I feel like at the moment!

Monday, 18 April 2011

550th Anniversary of the Battle of Towton








I wanted to write something profound; something moving and memorable in recognition of the great loss of life that unfolded as Edward erstwhile Earl of March took the crown of England. But in the end I think much has been said, particularly in recent months, thanks to the wonderful efforts of the Towton Battlefield Society putting our battlefield among the news headlines - even making the hallowed ground of Radio 4!










I think the 28,000 would have approved of the wonderful event on Sunday in which they were honoured and remembered by over 3,000 people in glorious sunshine - so much in contrast to the actual day of the battle - but no less poignant for it. And it was a real honour to meet the TBS patron, the eloquent Robert Hardy CBE, who gave voice to the thoughts of many who paid their respects and showed his love of and interest in all things mediaeval as he toured the site talking with re-enactors and public alike.






It was a great day and a wonderful tribute - what can we do for the 551st?